Fic Post! Dove "Whisper"

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Me again! It's a bit late and I was going through my files, stumbling upon Dove, and decided to go ahead and post something.

x-posted at darklight_raven

Dove Part ONE
Part TWO

Title: Dove--Whisper
Author:vippler
Rating: PG
Comic/Animated: Animated
Shipping: None specified, though hints of Terra/BB are present.
Chapters: One of many (N/A)
Story Type: General. Vignette. I've been told it gets a bit angsty.
Short Summary: Titan's in a chocolate covered nutshell.
Critique: Yes, please.

AN: This next bit goes to a series I'm still mulling over. Dove chocolates, I discovered, have cute little quotes in their wrappers; for whatever reason, I noted them all and saved them on a document. Months later, I used them as prompts and the random fandom I zeroed in on happened to star our Titans. So far, I have only elaborated on four of them. This is the first. ( cheat sheet to order--still the same for now )

This is actually the first one I wrote. I had absolutely nothing to go on but instinct an an outpour of words, so syntax just went out the window; tried to make it fit anyway. Would like to know if I pulled it off--please do tell, as I'm fairly edgy about how this batch turned out and opted for the off-the-wall version to see how it went down. Excessive parenthesis, dashes, etc. Much Love.

*nervous twitter*

( Dove--Whisper )

I've edited the third blurb on belated impulse. Please tell me which (off-key or new) version is better.

( One word: edited )

Am extremely worried about BB and Star.